Ще трохи експериментів з англійським віршуванням

[morreth]

в аду для перфекционистов
ни серы нету ни огня
и лишь слегка несимметрично
стоят щербатые котлы

there is no fire there is no brimstone
in the perfectionistic hell
there are just slightly dented cauldrons
lined up in an uneven row

Comments

[mprotsenko]

Sorry for the comment nobody asked for :)

I would've said "uneven row". "Untidy" - it's more like when a bed or a room is messy.

While "uneven" means "assymetrical" and conveys a meaning of "something is slightly off" as opposed to "everything is messed up".

[morreth]

Thank you. That will do.